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Untamed

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The scream tore its way from my lips,
Threw my head back,
And heaved my chest to the sky.

It cracked my breastbone,
Shattered my ribs,
And shoved my lungs aside,

All in search of my heart,

Which it clawed at desperately
Before ripping from my chest,
And whispering away to the wind.
More dooodles... This was written and fiddled with while I ran errands with my mom. There isn't necessarily any particular meaning behind it, but if you want to look into it feel free.
Feedback, constructive crit, and all that jazz is welcome...

SkyBlue

Edit: I'm entering this into the =WorldWar-Tori's General Lit. Contest. Here's the news article:[link]

For :iconthewrittenrevolution: Is this clear enough? I'm worried that it's too confusing. Also, how is the emotion? Is there anything I can do to improve?

P.S. parallel
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